Thursday, March 28, 2019

Task2 edited


 task2


This story was happened 7 years ago. I didn't see exactly what happened. I just took a break  for a moment.

My son really messed up everything all day long when we visited my mother's house. It ended up, my son broke little statue of  Mother Mary that my mother got from her mother when my mother got married. My mother has loved it for a long time of almost 50 years. That reminds her of her mother. She was so upset and furious. It looked she was holding a grudge against my son, forever...I was so sorry for breaking mother's most favorite thing. I tried to make up for my son's mistake and repair it, I decided to present new clothe for mom and we didn't visit to my mom's house till she call me first.

Fortunately, there is still statue Mother Mari on the mom's side table for praying. She already forgave us before I even give her present. But I've felt sorry for that day when I saw ugly statue Mother Mari. I love you, Mom!

1 comment:

  1. WHAT is "Mother Mari"?? haha - give some details to explain this to your readers.

    You followed the instructions for 3 paragraphs - congrats!

    - ...ends up/it ended up that my son broke....

    Your meaning is clear and your expressions are well-written - I would say your writing is getting clearer! YAY!

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